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climate change with lake in Hungary

climate change with lake in Hungary Gra5B

Our outdoor mesocosm experiment was established between June 2020 and August 2020 at Balaton Limnological Institute (N 46°54'48. 5", E 17°53'33. 9"). Our study mainly focused on the response of the zooplankton to warming and heat wave - these phenomena have become more popular in Europe nowadays. The facility consisted of 12 mesocosms, each with a maximum volume of 5000 L. Before two days at the beginning of this study, to achieve the natural plankton of the lake, mesocosms were filled water directly from lake Balaton - one of the biggest freshwater lakes in Europe with an average depth of 3. 5 m (Kutics, 2019). Water level was set to 120 cm, which resulted in an experimental volume of 3000 L. Three types of treatment were assigned to the twelve mesocosms with four replicates each: (1) ambient environmental condition (control); (2) a constant elevation of 3°C above the ambient water temperature (constant +3°C) for four week and (3) one- week heat wave treatment with an increasing temperature of 6 °C above the ambient water temperature (heat wave +6 °C) in the first and the third week. These treatments mimicking the predicted climate scenarios by the end of the twenty-first century, lake heatwaves will get hotter and longer.

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