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percentages of people who own the devices

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In this essay I want to describe of percentages of people who use the devices from 2010 to 2025. Firstly, in 2010 to 2015 most of them own tablet, laptop, smartphone and smart watche but from 2015 using laptop fall in 2٪ and start down to 10 % in 2025 but having other devices increased. As we go farther, owing tablet and laptop will decrease 3% to 5% in 2025 maybe because of taking some space and being heavy. However, having smartwatches are goig to rise frome 2020 to 2025 atleast 40%. In my opinion, owing new devises such as smartphone is going to rise because of their simplicity and being thin and easy to carry by so they are more popular among people and absolutely some devices will come that are more useful and easy to work with.
In this essay I want to
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describe
of percentages of
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people
who
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use
the devices from 2010 to 2025.
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, in 2010 to 2015 most of them
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own
tablet, laptop, smartphone and smart
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watche
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from 2015 using laptop fall in 2٪ and
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start
down to 10 % in 2025
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having other devices increased. As we go farther, owing tablet and laptop will decrease 3% to 5% in 2025 maybe
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because
of taking
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some
space and being heavy.
However
, having smartwatches are
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goig
to rise
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frome
2020 to 2025
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atleast
40%. In my opinion, owing new devises such as smartphone is going to rise
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because
of their simplicity and being thin and easy to carry by
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so
they are more popular among
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people
and
absolutely
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some
devices will
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that are more useful and easy to work with.
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IELTS essay percentages of people who own the devices

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