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Climate Change/Global Warming

Climate Change/Global Warming GMopL

Since last few decades climate change is afflicting our planet severely. What really is the proper role for individuals and institutions in addressing climate change? An immediate and natural response may be that everyone should do their part. Yes it's is the duty of the government, companies, and individuals to reduce carbon emission to save the planet. This essay will outline the role of each party in combating climate change. First as individual, we must significantly reduce the amount of heat-trapping emission we are putting into the atmosphere. For example use of public transport instead of car or bike to commute to office regularly by which we can save our own money and reduction in carbon dioxide emission. Second the institutions or the company decisions affecting carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions, for example, decisions by companies about how to produce electricity, as well as thousands of other goods and services with less carbon emission. Third and last to fully address the threat of global warming, we must demand action from our elected leaders to support and implement a comprehensive set of climate solutions: such as, expand the use of renewable energy and transform our energy system to a cleaner one. Place limits on the amount of carbon that polluters are allowed to emit. Build a clean energy economy by investing in efficient energy technologies, industries, and approaches. For example, increasing in solar energy plants and decrease in thermal power generation. Reduce tropical deforestation and its associated global warming emissions. Finally to conclude it is everybody responsibility to control the global warming to give better future to our next generation.

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First
 as individual, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
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significantly
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reduce
 the amount of heat-trapping emission we are putting into the atmosphere. For example
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use
 of public transport instead
 of car or bike to commute to office regularly
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 money and reduction in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsootgraphite
carbon
 dioxide emission.

Second the institutions or the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 decisions affecting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsootgraphite
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 dioxide (CO2) emissions, for example
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 as thousands of other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
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carbon
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Third and last to fully
 address the threat of global warming, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 demand action from our elected leaders to support and implement a comprehensive set of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtemperaturehumidity
climate
 solutions: such as, expand the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of renewable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 and transform our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 system to a cleaner one. Place limits on the amount of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsootgraphite
carbon
 that polluters are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to emit. Build a clean You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 economy by investing in efficient You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 technologies, industries, and approaches. For example
, increasing in solar You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 plants and decrease in thermal power generation. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
Reduce
 tropical deforestation and its associated global warming emissions.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
to conclude
 it is everybody responsibility to control the global warming to give better future to our next
 generation. 