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Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero. Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.

Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero. Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based. xmxgN
The claim states that any individual, insignificant of gender, can not be regarded as a hero anymore. The reason supporting the claim, is that media tends to destroy reputation of a person in the spotlight. This essay repudiates the claim and the supporting reason. In today's world, there are many people who are considered eminent in their respective fields. A hero described in the claim quite shows the narrowmindedness of the definition. A hero can a scientist, a political leader or maybe just a school teacher. And the reason why a person is appreciated is not because they have a special quality or power of some kind, but he/she is willing to put all their efforts to help out. No matter how much negativity there is in a society, there will always be someone who will be considered above all because of their endurance, integrity and dedication. Best example for this is Barack Obama. The reason given to support the claim surely states a fact visible around us. And people who do not understand the difference between a real and a fake news will surely support this reason. Now a days, any leader who is considered a hero is taken apart by the media and ruin their reputation. But this is clearly because the media is divided between political parties. And even if they are not supporting any political party, they try to log a fire based on wrong or insignificant events. Barak Obama, who was a successful president of the US, was criticized for wearing a tan suit in the Oval office and this was considered as a fall of reputation because it was not done by any former president. This essay shows how a person can be an eminent hero even with the hindrance created by the media.
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reason
supporting the
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, is that
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media
tends to
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destroy
reputation of a person in the spotlight. This essay repudiates the
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claim
and the supporting reason.

In
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today
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many
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people
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who
are
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considered
eminent in their respective fields. A hero
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narrowmindedness
of the definition. A hero can a scientist, a political leader or maybe
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just
a school teacher. And the
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why a person
is appreciated
is not
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because
they have a special quality or power of
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some
kind,
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but
he/she is willing to put all their efforts to
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help
out. No matter how much negativity there is in a society, there will always be someone
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who
will be
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considered
above all
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because
of their endurance, integrity and dedication.
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example for this is Barack Obama.

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given
to support the
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surely
states a fact visible around us. And
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people
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who
do not understand the difference between a real and a fake news will
surely
support this
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reason
.
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Now a days
, any leader
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who
is
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considered
a hero
is taken
apart by the
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media
and ruin their reputation.
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this is
clearly
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because
the
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media
is divided
between political parties. And even if they are not supporting any political party, they try to log a fire based on
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wrong
or insignificant
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events
.
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Barak
Obama,
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who
was a successful president of the US,
was criticized
for wearing a tan suit in the
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Oval office
and this was
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considered
as a fall of reputation
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because
it was not done by any former president.

This essay
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shows
how a person can be an eminent hero even with the hindrance created by the
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media
.
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IELTS essay Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero. Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
300 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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