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Circuit board production

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The sketches clarify the stages involve in the procedure of circuit-board At a first glance it seem to intiate with delivery and ends-up with transporting to factories overall, there are nine phases in the manufacture process of circuit board. To commence with earliest action variety of materials are supplied to different department Despite this the next activity includes fragmentation and spraying with blaze retardant beside this it is cleaned appropriately for the soldering and aic attahment part after the accomplishment of provided details, it is forwaded to several subsection for particular visual examination and experiments for quality and different undesriable chips are abolished away from the board. ultimately it become expedient for final testing but incase if any meance occurs the steps are repeated again and again once the product passes the final test it is distribute for packaging. Eventually the goods are carried into distinct factories for sale
The sketches clarify the stages involve in the procedure of circuit-board At a
first
glance it seem to
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intiate
with delivery and ends-up with transporting to factories
overall
, there are nine phases in the manufacture process of circuit board. To commence with
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earliest
action variety of materials
are supplied
to
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different
department Despite this the
next
activity includes fragmentation and spraying with blaze retardant beside this it
is cleaned
appropriately
for the soldering and
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aic
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attahment
part after the accomplishment of provided
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details
, it is
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forwaded
to
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several subsection
for particular visual examination and experiments for quality and
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different
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undesriable
chips
are abolished
away from the board.
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ultimately
it
Did you mean "becomes"?
become
expedient for final testing
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but
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incase
if any
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meance
occurs the steps are
Consider using "repeated".
repeated again
and again once the product passes the final
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
it is
Consider using a past participle here: "distributed".
distribute
for packaging.
Eventually
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
are carried
into distinct factories for
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
sale
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IELTS essay Circuit board production

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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