Although, cinema is becoming increasingly popular all over the world, but the result of a recent research reveals a downward trend cinema viewers affecting many countries in relation to this. This essay will discuss both causes of this trend and will propose a solution to solve this problem.
Firstly, one of the main causes for the number of cinema goers to decline is the easy and fast internet access. Unlimited movie download facility from the Internet as well as watching it online is giving people the opportunity to watch their favourite movies at homes. ‘Globalization and popularity of foreign movies’ are two other reasons why people do not go to movie theatres to watch local-made movies. The quality of local-made movies has declined in many countries and that’s why many people think it does not worth to go to the cinema hall to watch a movie.
There are some small measures that could be taken to decrease the sensitivity of this issue, restriction on Internet providers for free online movie videos could be an effective measure. Movies are copyrighted and the unlawful access to copyrighted materials for free should be controlled. In particular, the film industry can register a police report against online service providers for illegal copyrights of the original movies and free access to watch these. The quality of local movies should be enhanced to attract more people to watch it in the cinema halls.
In summary, the above problems can be solved to some extent by applying the suggested measures. It can be predicted that the drop in cinema attendance could be controlled by taking proper measures.
Although,
cinema
is becoming
increasingly
popular all over the world,
but
the result of a recent research reveals a downward trend
cinema
viewers affecting
many
countries in relation to this. This essay will discuss both causes of this trend and will propose a solution to solve this problem.
Firstly
, one of the main causes for the number of
cinema
goers to decline is the easy and
fast
internet access. Unlimited
movie
download facility from the Internet
as well
as watching it online is giving
people
the opportunity to
watch
their
favourite
movies
at homes. ‘Globalization and popularity of foreign
movies’
are two other reasons why
people
do not go to
movie
theatres
to
watch
local-made
movies
. The quality of local-made
movies
has declined in
many
countries and that’s why
many
people
think
it does not worth to go to the
cinema
hall to
watch
a movie.
There are
some
small
measures
that could
be taken
to decrease the sensitivity of this issue, restriction on Internet providers for free online
movie
videos could be an effective
measure
.
Movies
are copyrighted
and the unlawful access to copyrighted materials for free should
be controlled
.
In particular
, the film industry can register a police report against online service providers for illegal copyrights of the original
movies
and free access to
watch
these. The quality of local
movies
should
be enhanced
to attract more
people
to
watch
it in the
cinema
halls.
In summary, the above problems can
be solved
to
some
extent by applying the suggested
measures
. It can
be predicted
that the drop in
cinema
attendance could
be controlled
by taking proper
measures
.
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