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“The Road Not Taken” by Robert Frost is a poem that reflects the author’s indecisiveness in making choice in life. The traveler in this poem stood at the crossroad and hesitated to decide what road as well as what career to take, he was confused whether to pursue a career in poetry or continue to be a farmer and this indecisiveness might be explained by following two reasons. Firstly, it is not easy for the author to forget what has stuck with him for a long time and brought him many achievements. We all know that the author has been following his family’s career as a farmer for nine years and it has been very successful. Therefore, when he had to give up this job, he was a little reluctant and sometimes still thinking about it “Oh, I kept the first for another day” even though he chose to be a poet. Secondly, the author does not know what awaits at the destination of the selected road. Contrary to the first familiar road, the second one is describes as “grassy and wanted to wear”, which shows that it is very risky and unexplored. Therefore, the traveler realizes that it is so challenging to be the first discoverer as well as a poet. The road he took is challenging and risky, but he is not sure whether the selected road will be better or not. The phrase “it bent in the undergrowth” indicates that the author is quite confused because of not knowing how the chosen one will succeed or fail. Although it will be difficult when faced with life-changing choices, I firmly believe that no matter which road we choose, as long as we commit and dedicate ourselves to the selected road, it would be the right. A clear example to clarify this idea is choosing a future career. After completing high school, I decided to continue my education to become an English teacher, while my best friend decided to become a personal trainer at the gym. This shocked and worried me at first, so I persuaded him to keep studying, but he is still firm with his choice, and constantly dedicates himself to his career. Now, after 4 years, he has become a successful personal trainer. In short, choosing which road is not as important as the way we go on that road.
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Not Taken” by Robert Frost is a poem that reflects the
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author’s
indecisiveness in making choice in life. The traveler in this poem stood at the crossroad and hesitated to decide what
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road
as well
as what
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career
to take, he
was confused
whether to pursue a
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career
in poetry or continue to be a farmer and this indecisiveness might be
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explained
by following two reasons.
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author
to forget what has stuck with him for a long time and brought him
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many
achievements. We all know that the
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author
has been following his family’s
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career
as a farmer for nine years and it has been
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very
successful.
Therefore
, when he had to give up this job, he was a
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little
reluctant and
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sometimes
still
thinking about it “Oh, I
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kept
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for another day”
even though
he chose to be a poet.
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, the
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does not know what awaits at the destination of the selected
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. Contrary to the
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first
familiar
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, the second one is
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as “grassy and wanted to wear”, which
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very
risky and unexplored.
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, the traveler realizes that it is
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so
challenging to be the
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first
discoverer
as well
as a poet. The
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road
he took is challenging and risky,
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but
he is not sure whether the selected
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road
will be better or not. The phrase “it bent in the undergrowth” indicates that the
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author
is quite confused
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because
of not knowing how the chosen one will succeed or fail.

Although it will be difficult when faced with life-changing choices, I
firmly
believe that no matter which
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road
we choose, as long as we commit and dedicate ourselves to the selected
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road
, it would be the right. A
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clear
example to clarify this
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idea
is choosing a future
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career
. After completing high school, I decided to continue my education to become an English teacher, while my best friend decided to become a personal trainer at the gym. This shocked and worried me at
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first
,
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so
I persuaded him to
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keep
studying,
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he is
still
firm with his choice, and
constantly
dedicates himself to his
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career
.
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Now
, after 4 years, he has become a successful personal trainer. In short, choosing which
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road
is not as
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important
as the way we go on that
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road
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IELTS essay choosing future career for teenager

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
394 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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