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Describe your part-time job you have ever done

Describe your part-time job you have ever done M3Owk

During my freshman and sophomore year, except my course work I still have abundant time. So I decided to do some part-time jobs to earn my tuition Because of my goodness english so I decided to apply for a part-time teaching assistant at an English centre in Ha Noi. And my dream will become English teacher so I wanted to get a job that would allow me to use as many English skills as possible. Luckily, I have got it. My main duties were coordinating classes’ activities from preparing learning materials to helping students understand what foreign teachers said. I also assisted in checking students’ essays twice a week. The job sharpened my public speaking skills a lot and so gave me a head start for my teaching career later. . I helped my students with any difficulties in English and even gave them some extra pronunciation lessons. I worked there for nearly two years before I concentrated on my last year of study at university. So far I still keep in touch with some of them and we are now close friends. Although the salary of this job was not very high, it gave me a rewarding experience. I still keep in touch with some of friends. I’ll never forget this part-time job because I find it a beneficial way to both enhance my English skills and supplement my income

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 assisted in checking students’ essays twice a week. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 sharpened my public speaking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 a lot and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 gave me a head This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 for my teaching career later. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 my students with any difficulties in English and even gave them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 extra pronunciation lessons. I worked there for nearly
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before
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 far I still
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keep
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 close friends. Although the salary of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
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very
 high, it gave me a rewarding experience. I still
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keep
 in touch with After 'some of', you should use 'the' ("some of the friends") or simply say "some friends".some of the friendssome friends
some of friends
.

I’ll never forget this part-time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I find it a beneficial way to both enhance my English This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and supplement my income