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Children’s are not much interested in studies .how to motivate students for their academic achievements?

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Education place a significant role in building a better carrier also it improve the knowledge of people. Nowadays children’s are not much interested in studies. In this essay I intended to delve how to motivate students for their academic achievementsFirstly, although there are wide range of methods to assist children to improve their academics studies But the major ones made any healthy relationship between student and teacher. In addition a moral total can influence a child because they have attractive charisma. If a student have a lack of concentration on their studies a motivator tutor can assist you for that. For example Dr BR Ambedkar was a pure faculty when he was teaching so the students had great interest on him Secondly, the teachers behaviour also an motivating factor for children, eventhough reward also generate particular interest towards subjects. While studying revert and awards are the most convenient way to upsurge the skills of students. If a student achieve award for my teacher and this would definitely motivate him. For the more provides play a prominent way in motivating children. Even a moral appreciation also assist the students to improve their academic skills. To illustrate a student magazine Published that appreciation and reward increase students Academy statusEventually the entertainment activity can I also in larger interest towards studies because mixing up of education and extracurricular activities are outstanding Combination. While including physical training activities in studies assist the students for expanding the concentration. In recent days most of the education organisations are promoting entertainment activities because they know the value of it. For instance the famous mind influencer says that entertainment can enlarge engrossment towards particular subjectIn conclusion call Joe there are wide range of solution for decision gross meant to eat studies but the most convenient way is alter the attitude towards education.
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also
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improve
the knowledge of
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people
. Nowadays
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children’s
are not much interested in
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studies
. In this essay I intended to delve how to motivate
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students
for their academic
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achievementsFirstly
, although there are wide range of methods to assist
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children
to
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improve
their academics
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studies
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But
the major ones made any healthy relationship between
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student
and teacher. In
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addition
a moral total can influence a child
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because
they have attractive charisma. If a
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student
have a lack of concentration on their
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studies
a motivator tutor can assist you for that.
For example
Dr BR
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Ambedkar
was a pure faculty when he was teaching
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the
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students
had great interest on him
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teachers
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behaviour
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an
motivating factor for
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children
,
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eventhough
reward
also
generate particular interest towards subjects. While studying revert and awards are the most convenient way to upsurge the
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skills
of
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students
. If a
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student
achieve award for my teacher and this would definitely motivate him. For the more provides play a prominent way in motivating
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children
. Even a moral appreciation
also
assist the
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students
to
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improve
their academic
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skills
. To illustrate a
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student
magazine Published that appreciation and reward increase
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students
Academy
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statusEventually
the entertainment
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activity
can I
also
in larger interest towards
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studies
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because
mixing up of
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education
and extracurricular
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activities
are outstanding Combination. While including physical training
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activities
in
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studies
assist the
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students
for expanding the concentration. In recent days most of the
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education
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organisations
are promoting entertainment
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activities
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because
they know the value of it.
For instance
the
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famous
mind influencer says that entertainment can enlarge engrossment towards particular
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subjectIn
conclusion call Joe there are wide range of solution for decision gross meant to eat
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studies
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but
the most convenient way is alter the attitude towards
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education
.
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IELTS essay Children’s are not much interested in studies. how to motivate students for their academic achievements?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
304 words
5.5
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