People have different views on whether children from wealthy (families) or low – income families would cope better with life challenges. While I understand that a materially abundant life may offer some advantages, I would argue that being brought up in poverty-stricken families is usually more beneficial. Very wellwritten! On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why some people advocate nurturing children in comfortable environments. One of the essential elements is that children in wealthy families are undoubtedly provided with better living conditions and learning materials. With the widely available (re)sources of information, these children are likely to achieve better academic achievements than their poorer peers. In addition, children who have prosperous parents often obtain good-quality childminding and after-school childcare; hence, they are allowed to focus completely on their studies and enjoy other extra-curriculum activities. On the other hand, I believe that being brought up in families which are lack of financial resources would better prepare children for their future. Firstly, junior members in impoverished families are usually educated about the value of money in their formative years, as well as learning how to support their parents in earning money. Therefore, they could engage in diverse activities and be equipped with various life/soft skills that may be extremely useful in their adult lives, such as communication (skills) or problem-solving skills. Secondly, if children are given the chance to interact with the reality from their early stages in life, they could develop strong personalities to overcome adversity in their adulthood, and thus/thereby coping better with the competitive world. For example, a child that grew up in a working-class family and since my childhood I have been cultivating/ cultivated valuable virtues of life like responsibility, endurance, and diligence, which helps me a great deal in leading my adult life. In conclusion, while it is true that children growing up in wealthy families benefit in some ways, this is by no means that they can be better prepared for life’s challenges than children whose childhood suffers from poverty.
People
have
different
views on whether
children
from wealthy
(families)
or low
–
income
families
would cope
better
with
life
challenges. While I understand that a
materially
abundant
life
may offer
some
advantages, I would argue that
being brought
up in poverty-stricken
families
is
usually
more beneficial.
Very
wellwritten
! On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why
some
people
advocate nurturing
children
in comfortable environments. One of the essential elements is that
children
in wealthy
families
are
undoubtedly
provided with
better
living conditions and learning materials. With the
widely
available (re)sources of information, these
children
are likely to achieve
better
academic achievements than their poorer peers.
In addition
,
children
who have prosperous parents
often
obtain
good
-quality childminding and after-school childcare;
hence
, they are
allowed
to focus completely on their studies and enjoy other extra-curriculum activities.
On the other hand
, I believe that
being brought
up in
families
which are lack of financial resources would
better
prepare
children
for their future.
Firstly
, junior members in impoverished
families
are
usually
educated about the value of money in their formative years,
as well
as learning how to support their parents in earning money.
Therefore
, they could engage in diverse activities and
be equipped
with various life/soft
skills
that may be
extremely
useful in their adult
lives
, such as communication (
skills
) or problem-solving
skills
.
Secondly
, if
children
are
given
the chance to interact with the reality from their early stages in
life
, they could develop strong personalities to overcome adversity in their adulthood, and
thus
/thereby coping
better
with the competitive world.
For example
, a child that grew up in a working-
class
family
and since my childhood I have been cultivating/ cultivated valuable virtues of
life
like responsibility, endurance, and diligence, which
helps
me a great deal in leading my adult
life
.
In conclusion
, while it is true that
children
growing up in wealthy
families
benefit in
some
ways, this is by no means that they can be
better
prepared for
life’s
challenges than
children
whose childhood suffers from poverty.