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Children should be taught what is wrong and right

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In my opinion, the best and safest method of punishment would be making girls do household chores and limiting boys' access to playing games. If children behave badly, parents can apply punishment methods such as cleaning, cooking, washing the dishes or any type of chores at home that are disliked by children. Since many boys cannot imagine and spend even their one day without playing games, parents and teachers can use this for their advantage. By this way, children can understand their mistake and try not to repeat that again. Learning from their mistakes within their childhood can be very helpful for them to build better behavior and the sense of responsibility. In conclusion, although parents and teachers shoulder the responsibility of helping children distinguish what is right and wrong, they should also be careful when deciding how to punish them. As child abuse might contribute to deterioration of child's well-being, less severe types of punishment is preferable.

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