Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement? v.31
Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. v. 31
Indeed, Adolescents' development is an enormous concern, amid of TV's addiction. This box provides, a variety of informative channels, which help the viewers in pictorial learning, that imprints vividly, in the memory, as compared to the theories, however, producers modified the scripts of a true story, which forge wrong information in juveniles' innocent minds. I agree to some degree, that an idiot box cannot be an alternative of a library, which stores diverse collection.
Usually, It is noticed, that juveniles keep occupied with their favourite shows, on a regular basis. As far as I have seen, nowadays many of the movies and shows are based on biopics, true stories or related to history. Generally, writers doctor the contents, just to make it intriguing, and to ameliorate the TRP of their respective channels is also one of the causative factors for the same. For example, Ramayana, Swamvar, Prathiviraj Chauhan are certain historical daily shops, which even available in cartoons, now. As a result of it, offsprings gain false insights about the history and other respective areas.
Although, the education system is at progressive stage, yet the persistence of graphic narratives is way more effecting than bookish language. Earlier, where folks did not have such entertainments in the home, they used to spend time in discussions with their grand ones, teachers and friends, and having discussed things used to innovate ideas, which include versatile knowledge and experiences. For instance, researchers and scientists always experiment things without artificial resources. Irrefutable, now, offsprings get insights from fake scripts, which is a pernicious practice.
To conclude, undoubtedly it's a rich resource of amusement, but an entertainment tool can never provide teaching assistance. As far as I believe, half knowledge is always deleterious, so it is better to be uneducated about something, rather than getting deepen.
Indeed
, Adolescents' development is an enormous concern, amid of TV's addiction. This box provides, a variety of informative channels, which
help
the viewers in pictorial learning, that imprints
vividly
, in the memory, as compared to the theories,
however
, producers modified the scripts of a true story, which forge
wrong
information in juveniles' innocent minds. I
agree
to
some
degree, that an idiot box cannot be an alternative of a library, which stores diverse collection.
Usually
, It
is noticed
, that juveniles
keep
occupied with their
favourite
shows
, on a regular basis. As far as I have
seen
, nowadays
many
of the movies and
shows
are based
on biopics, true stories or related to history.
Generally
, writers doctor the contents,
just
to
make
it intriguing, and to ameliorate the TRP of their respective channels is
also
one of the causative factors for the same.
For example
, Ramayana,
Swamvar
,
Prathiviraj
Chauhan are certain historical daily shops, which even available in cartoons,
now
.
As a result
of it,
offsprings
gain false insights about the history and other respective areas.
Although, the education system is at progressive stage,
yet
the persistence of graphic narratives is way more effecting than bookish language. Earlier, where folks did not have such entertainments in the home, they
used
to spend time in discussions with their grand ones, teachers and friends, and having discussed things
used
to innovate
ideas
, which include versatile knowledge and experiences.
For instance
, researchers and scientists always experiment things without artificial resources. Irrefutable,
now
,
offsprings
get
insights from fake scripts, which is a pernicious practice.
To conclude
,
undoubtedly
it's a rich resource of amusement,
but
an entertainment tool can never provide teaching assistance. As far as I believe, half knowledge is always deleterious,
so
it is better to
be uneducated
about something,
rather
than getting deepen.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes