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children goes to parallel parents behaviour of they are made to follow strict rules they were either or become Rebellious . how can parents go about setting rules for children.

children goes to parallel parents behaviour of they are made to follow strict rules they were either or become Rebellious. how can parents go about setting rules for children. BaLlm
Some families belong to old minded so making a rule very strict and hardness and on the other hand, some families believe to friendly behaviour because they also consider to freedom. Generally, the speaking rule is the rule. so parents are coming from the past decade so making a rule very strick because they children make no mistake. But it is not good enough for kids. Kids will be able to see and then kids teach.
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IELTS essay children goes to parallel parents behaviour of they are made to follow strict rules they were either or become Rebellious. how can parents go about setting rules for children.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
76 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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