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Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to school. What are reasons? Provide some solution.

Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to school. What are reasons? Provide some solution. bYG7P
Unfortunately, children get distracted during school studies. It is becoming an increasingly significant problem in many schools, societies and, countries. Although distraction endangered many children’s future, their effects can also be combated successfully. This essay looks at some reasons for the interference while studying at school and suggests some solutions to ameliorate the problems. Hindrance during the study is caused by multiple reasons. Distraction reasons are very obvious. One of them is modern digital gadgets such as smartphones, laptops. Despite the distraction, parents allow their children to engage with these dangerous gadgets. For example, many children use this equipment at an early age for gaming and web surfing purposes. Therefore, they are less consternated towards their study. Another reason is the atmosphere of a child during their study period in the school. In other words, a child, friends with others who are not focused on the study and it results in distraction and low grades. One good example is that child involve in some activity like smoking and drinking because of their friends. However, the menace of distraction can be fought by some. Education is the main way to tackle this issue. To exemplify, parents and teachers should be educated about the use of gadgets in students and how they can be an objection in their study. Perhaps, they should be aware of their child and/or student what they are doing in their spare time and what their leisure activities are. In addition, the government should implement some laws to restrict the use of phones and digital gadgets in school time. In conclusion, gadgets and the surrounding atmosphere has a major detrimental impact on a child’s concentration. The best approach to deal with it is educating parents and teachers about the appropriate use of smartphone and their use among students and government laws.
Unfortunately,
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children
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get
distracted during
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school
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studies
. It is becoming an
increasingly
significant problem in
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many
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schools
, societies and, countries. Although
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distraction
endangered
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many
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children’s
future, their effects can
also
be combated
successfully
. This essay looks at
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some
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reasons
for the interference while studying at
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school
and suggests
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some
solutions to ameliorate the problems.

Hindrance during the
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study
is caused
by multiple
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reasons
.
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Distraction
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reasons
are
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very
obvious. One of them is modern digital
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gadgets
such as smartphones, laptops. Despite the
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distraction
, parents
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allow
their
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children
to engage with these
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dangerous
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gadgets
.
For example
,
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many
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children
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use
this equipment at an early age for gaming and web surfing purposes.
Therefore
, they are less
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consternated
towards their
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study
. Another
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reason
is the atmosphere of a
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child
during their
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study
period in the
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school
.
In other words
, a
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child
, friends with others who are not focused on the
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study
and it results in
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distraction
and low grades. One
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good
example is that
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child
involve in
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some
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activity
like smoking and drinking
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because
of their friends.

However
, the menace of
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distraction
can
be fought
by
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some
. Education is the main way to tackle this issue. To exemplify, parents and teachers should
be educated
about the
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use
of
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gadgets
in students and how they can be an objection in their
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study
. Perhaps, they should be aware of their
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child
and/or student what they are doing in their spare time and what their leisure activities are.
In addition
, the
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government
should implement
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some
laws to restrict the
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use
of phones and digital
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gadgets
in
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school
time.

In conclusion
,
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gadgets
and the surrounding atmosphere has a major detrimental impact on a
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child’s
concentration. The best approach to deal with it is educating parents and teachers about the appropriate
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use
of smartphone and their
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use
among students and
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government
laws.
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IELTS essay Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to school. What are reasons? Provide some solution.

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303 words
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