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Childhood is the happiest time of a persons' lifeAgree or disagree?????

Childhood is the happiest time of a persons' lifeAgree or disagree? ? ? ? ? 2bgQo
The journey of human being from hunting and gathering society to modern society represents the story of any humans' child. There has been an ongoing debate as to whether childhood is the happiest time or not. Some people believe that childhood is unforgettable period for any person due to its unique traits, there are others holding the opposite idea on this point. As far as from my perspective, childhood is so enjoyable time for humans because they do not have serious liabilities, also they always experience new stories. The first reason, which should be maintained here is that children do not have serious responsibilities. As a matter of fact, nobody expects a little child to be concerned about important events in the world. For example, children never be aware about global warming and inflation: therefore, they have exciting conditions. Furthermore, Children do not have tremendus burden of responsibilities and worries like giving a academic project on time, working more time for paying loan and so forth. That makes a fascination lifestyle for child, and she or he never encounter with distractive stress that is common in these days. Thus, children spend their time for making enjoyable time without having any ideas, experiences. The other reason, which deserves to be considered is that children do not have monotonous lifestyle. In that case, kids always investigate their surounding based on their natural curious feeling: hence, most of the time, they learn new thing because humans demand for new something and innovator idea will never diminish. It makes exciting time for children, which is rare for any adult. Additionally, Child's mind is like a blind paper, where she or he write precious values like honesty and affection on it. To illustrate, children have smile body language, when people play with them, or children divide their food with others without paying attention to humans skin color. To put everything in a nutshell, childhood is the fascinating and hapiest period in humans' life because they have a wide variety modest and pure characteristics. Humans never forget their child time reasoning that children are roses of god garden.
The journey of
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being from hunting and gathering society to modern society represents the story of any humans'
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child
. There has been an ongoing debate
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as to whether
childhood is the happiest
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or not.
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believe that childhood is unforgettable period for any person due to its unique traits, there are others holding the opposite
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idea
on this point. As far as from my perspective, childhood is
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so
enjoyable
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time
for
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humans
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because
they do not have serious liabilities,
also
they always experience new stories.

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first
reason, which should
be maintained
here is that
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children
do not have serious responsibilities. As a matter of fact, nobody
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expects
a
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little
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child
to
be concerned
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important
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events
in the world.
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,
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children
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never be
aware about global warming and inflation:
therefore
, they have exciting conditions.
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,
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do not have
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burden of responsibilities and worries like giving
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, working more
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for paying loan and
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so
forth. That
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makes
a fascination lifestyle for
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, and she or he never
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distractive
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that is
common in these days.
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,
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spend their
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time
for making enjoyable
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time
without having any
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ideas
, experiences.

The other reason, which deserves to
be considered
is that
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children
do not have monotonous lifestyle.
In that case
, kids always investigate their
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surounding
based on their natural curious feeling:
hence
, most of the
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time
, they learn new thing
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because
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humans
demand for new something and innovator
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idea
will never diminish. It
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makes
exciting
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time
for
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children
, which is rare for any adult.
Additionally
, Child's mind is like a blind paper, where she or he
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write
precious values like honesty and affection on it. To illustrate,
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children
have smile body language, when
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people
play with them, or
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children
divide their food with others without paying attention to
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humans
skin color.

To put everything in a nutshell, childhood is the fascinating and
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hapiest
period in humans' life
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because
they have a wide variety modest and pure characteristics.
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Humans
never forget their
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child
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time
reasoning that
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are roses of god garden.

IELTS essay Childhood is the happiest time of a persons' lifeAgree or disagree? ? ? ? ?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
352 words
6.0
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