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Checking the Changes in the manuscript

Checking the Changes in the manuscript 66OnG
I hope this email finds you well. First of all, please accept my deepest gratitude for culminating the review process of manuscript JEEE-02-2021-0051. R1. I reached out to inform you that figure 1 needs a change. The variable opportunity recognition has been mistyped in the place of Innovativeness. I am extremely sorry about this nonaccomplishment, as this mistake slipped the eyes of many, including the reviewers and myself. I was hoping for a way to correct this before commencing the publishment.
I hope this email finds you well.
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First of all
,
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accept my deepest gratitude for culminating the review process of manuscript JEEE-02-2021-0051. R1.

I reached out to inform you that figure 1 needs a
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change
. The variable opportunity recognition has
been mistyped
in the place of Innovativeness. I am
extremely
sorry about this
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nonaccomplishment
, as this mistake slipped the eyes of
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many
, including the reviewers and
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myself
. I was hoping for a way to correct this
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before
commencing the
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publishment
.
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IELTS essay Checking the Changes in the manuscript

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
81 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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