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get
knowledge about
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products
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when we
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see
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about
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sales in this
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product
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definitely it increases after of salary rate. To
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letter view
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people
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company
about their
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own
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products
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famous and
it will affect both individual and sellers. Taking everything into consideration
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people
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proper investigation and
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will be beneficial for
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IELTS essay some people believe that advertisement is beneficial for business and individuals while other argue that discuss both along with opinion

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
287 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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