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cause and effects of not being able to register the course as planned.

cause and effects of not being able to register the course as planned. r6eBN
During the new semester registration time on the web portal, I am unable to register for a planned course. The reasons and implications of this will discussed in this article. Due to network issues and overlap with other sessions, I am unable to enroll in the course as scheduled. First, I couldn't register for the course since the network was down. Despite the fact that the registration link was open until 8: 00 p. m. , I couldn't get in until 2 a. m. , and the class was full. I have to register for classes that don't go according to plan. Secondly, due to overlapping classes, I could not sign up for all the courses as planned. For example, listening class takes place in period 2 and 3, then writing class starts from period 3 and 4. So both subjects overlapped in period 3 that's why I couldn't register for all subjects. Not being able to sign up has had a lot of impact. I can't study enough subjects this semester. For example my listening class has to completed in term 3 but I can't register it, I have to take that class next term. Moreover, I will not be able to study with my peers, but I will have to study with the children of the next class. It is also a difficult thing to be able to socialize and share with people who are not at the same level. The fact that I was unable to enroll in the intended course had a significant impact on me. I'm hoping that the school can assist me in re-registering for the classes I've missed so that I can keep up with you guys.
During the new semester registration time on the web portal, I am unable to
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register
for a planned
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course
. The reasons and implications of this will discussed in this article.

Due to network issues and overlap with other sessions, I am unable to enroll in the
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course
as scheduled.
First
, I couldn't
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register
for the
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course
since the network was down. Despite the fact that the registration link was open until 8: 00 p. m.
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,
I couldn't
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get
in until 2 a. m.
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and the
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class
was full. I
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have to
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register
for
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classes
that don't go according to plan.
Secondly
, due to overlapping
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classes
, I could not
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sign
up for all the
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courses
as planned.
For example
, listening
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class
takes place in period 2 and 3, then writing
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class
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starts
from period 3 and 4.
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So
both subjects overlapped in period 3 that's why I couldn't
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register
for all subjects.

Not being able to
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sign
up has had
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a lot of
impact. I can't study
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enough
subjects this semester.
For example
my listening
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class
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has to
completed in term 3
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I can't
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it, I
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have to
take that
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class
next
term.
Moreover
, I will not be able to study with my peers,
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but
I will
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have to
study with the children of the
next
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class
. It is
also
a difficult thing to be able to socialize and share with
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people
who are not at the same level.

The fact that I was unable to enroll in the intended
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course
had a significant impact on me. I'm hoping that the school can assist me in re-registering for the
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classes
I've missed
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so
that I can
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keep
up with you guys.
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IELTS essay cause and effects of not being able to register the course as planned.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
284 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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