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Cause and effects of global warming

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In our fast-paced world consequences and reasons of the global warming, which is the increase of earth’s temperature level, are utterly alarming. Nowadays there are an immense quantity of cars and industries which emit continually fumes. It damages the Ozone layer and causes the global warming. Moving to outcomes, firstly, it leads to drought-agricultural problems. That is to say that farmers lose a large amount of their crops. What is more, global warming results in spread of infectious disease among people. Humankind stays in danger of a diversity of illnesses, so everyone should have a self-protection against them. And to make matters worse, it creates animal and plant species extinction which have a negative influence on the life-nature chain. To put in a nutshell, the issue of global warming is truly grave and requires useful measures.
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-paced world consequences and reasons of the
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, which is the increase of earth’s temperature level, are
utterly
alarming. Nowadays there are an immense quantity of cars and industries which emit
continually
fumes. It damages the Ozone layer and causes the
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global
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warming
. Moving to outcomes,
firstly
, it leads to drought-agricultural problems.
That is
to say that farmers lose a large amount of their crops.
What is more
,
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global
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warming
results in spread of infectious disease among
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people
. Humankind stays in
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danger
of a diversity of illnesses,
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everyone should have a self-protection against them. And to
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matters worse, it creates animal and plant species extinction which have a
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negative
influence on the life-nature chain. To put in a nutshell, the issue of
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is
truly
grave and requires useful measures.
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IELTS essay Cause and effects of global warming

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
136 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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