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Castle of the England that which we are seeing

Castle of the England that which we are seeing 9q7r
The castle, a strong stone structure, which invokes images of kings and knights, dragons and princesses, is such an integral part of medieval history. One cannot think history without thinking about the towering structures of stone that dominated the green landscapes of the past. These stone monoliths served many purposes: buildings of government, defense, symbols of power, and homes. Just as it has varied purposes, the castles diverse and interesting history, from tiny wooden structures to the tent
The castle, a strong stone structure, which invokes images of kings and knights, dragons and princesses, is such an integral part of medieval history. One cannot
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history without thinking about the towering structures of stone that dominated the green landscapes of the past. These stone monoliths served
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purposes: buildings of
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as it has varied purposes, the castles diverse and interesting history, from tiny wooden structures to the
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IELTS essay Castle of the England that which we are seeing

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
77 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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