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Cars which burn fossils fuel must be banned. Do you agree or disagree

Cars which burn fossils fuel must be banned. 56e1Q
All the cars that brun fossil fuel should be banned and replace it with electric cars I agree that all the cars which burn fossils fuels should be banned because they are dameging the envoirement day by day and it also consume much fuel (petrol or diesol) Cars whic burn fossil fuel aredameging the envoirnement day by day. There are many reason of global warmingbut the cars which emit co2 gase have very important role in the global warming which diectly dameging the envoirement and making the live hard on this planet As we know carbon di oxide gase is too much dangerous for human health and the presence of this gase in the atmosphere is the direct killing of human lives e. g (Carbon di oxiede emission from cars are big reason to banned it as soon as possible. ) Another reason to banne these types of cars is the fuel consumption. Fuel(petrol or diesol) are much expensive some countries are under deveploed and it is very difficult to them to import it from other countries on less cost because the technology use for it is very expesnive and the is cost by itself is too much high. Importing of fuel means direct damege to economy of a counrty which drag the country to a very diffucult satuation. E. g (Consumption of fuel is very economic and effect the country on an extreme level) In last i suggest the cars which burn fossils fuel should banned and replace them with a good technologys cars like electric car as it will be a sustainable development for the pepole and also for the envoirnment.
All the
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cars
that
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brun
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fossil
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fuel
should be
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banned
and replace it with electric cars

I
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that all the
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cars
which burn
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fossils
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fuels
should be
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banned
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because
they are
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dameging
the
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envoirement
day by day and it
also
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consume
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much
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fuel
(petrol or
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diesol
)

Cars
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whic
burn
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fossil
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fuel
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aredameging
the
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envoirnement
day by day. There are
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many reason
of global
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warmingbut
the
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cars
which emit co2
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gase
have
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very
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important
role in the global warming which
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diectly
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dameging
the
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envoirement
and making the
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live
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hard
on this
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planet


As we know carbon
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di
oxide
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gase
is too
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much
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dangerous
for human health and the presence of this
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gase
in the atmosphere is the direct killing of human
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lives


e. g (Carbon
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di
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oxiede
emission from
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cars
are
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big
reason to
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banned
it as
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soon
as possible.
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)


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banne
these types of
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cars
is the
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fuel
consumption.

Fuel(petrol or
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diesol
) are
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much
expensive
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some
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countries
are under
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deveploed
and it is
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very
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difficult to them
to import it from other
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countries
on less cost
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because
the technology
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use
for it is
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very
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expesnive
and the
is cost
by itself is too
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much
high.

Importing of
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fuel
means direct
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damege
to economy of a
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counrty
which drag the
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country
to a
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very
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diffucult
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satuation
.

E. g (Consumption of
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fuel
is
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very
economic and effect the
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country
on an extreme level)

In last
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i
suggest the
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cars
which burn
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fossils
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fuel
should
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banned
and replace them with a
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good
technologys
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cars
like electric
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car
as it will be a sustainable development for the
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pepole
and
also
for the
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envoirnment
.

IELTS essay Cars which burn fossils fuel must be banned.

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