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Capital punishment given to criminals to control crime rate. To what extent you agree

Capital punishment given to criminals to control crime rate. To what extent you agree o5rgq

Nowadays, crime rate is increasing day by day that’s why masses feel insecure and without capital punishment criminals are rising. In my opinion, On the whole i agree but i have some reservations about the death penalty. To commence with, population is rising and the desires of humans also. Some of the individual get involved in crime and few of the crime should not be ignored by the government like terrorism because it include mass murdring most of the innocent people die also, the rapist should be punished by the death penalty. There are also such type of crime in which only the captial punishment is necessary to set example for the criminals, who do crimes like human trafficking and molestation of adolescents. For instance kabus like terrorist

Nowadays, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crime
 rate is increasing day by day that’s why masses feel insecure and without capital punishment criminals are rising. In my opinion, On the whole
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 reservations about the death penalty.

To commence with, population is rising and the desires of humans also
. If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?Some
Some of the
 individual This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 involved in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crime
 and few of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crime
 should not be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :neglected
ignored
 by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 like terrorism This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it Did you mean "includes"?includes
include
 mass Possible spelling mistake found.murdering
murdring
 most of the innocent This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :pass away
die
also
, the rapist should be punished
 by the death penalty. There are also
 such type of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crime
 in which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 the Possible spelling mistake found.capital
captial
 punishment is necessary to set example for the criminals, who do You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crimes
 like human trafficking and molestation of adolescents. For instance
Possible spelling mistake found.Kabul
kabus
 like Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphterrorist.terrorist!terrorist?terrorist:terrorist,terrorist;
terrorist