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Capital punishment given to criminals to control crime rate. To what extent you agree

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Nowadays, crime rate is increasing day by day that’s why masses feel insecure and without capital punishment criminals are rising. In my opinion, On the whole i agree but i have some reservations about the death penalty. To commence with, population is rising and the desires of humans also. Some of the individual get involved in crime and few of the crime should not be ignored by the government like terrorism because it include mass murdring most of the innocent people die also, the rapist should be punished by the death penalty. There are also such type of crime in which only the captial punishment is necessary to set example for the criminals, who do crimes like human trafficking and molestation of adolescents. For instance kabus like terrorist
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rate is increasing day by day that’s why masses feel insecure and without capital punishment criminals are rising. In my opinion,
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reservations about the death penalty.

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and few of the
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punishment is necessary to set example for the criminals, who do
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IELTS essay Capital punishment given to criminals to control crime rate. To what extent you agree

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