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Cancer treatment. Discuss it.

Cancer treatment. Discuss it. 85dRw
Cancer is one of the most common diseases of today, and numerous drug groups are used in its treatment. One of the drug groups used in cancer treatment is cisplatin, which is a platinum complex. Cisplatin is an antineoplastic agent used in the treatment of testicular, ovary, oral cavity, and pharynx, lung, cervical, lymph node, bone, skin, bladder, brain, and kidney cancers. The main mechanism of action of cisplatin is inhibition of DNA replication and killing of rapidly proliferating carcinogenic cells. It does this by binding to the N-7 reagent center on purine residues, interfering with normal transcription and replication mechanisms, causing DNA damage and preventing cell division. In addition to providing successful treatments, cisplatin is also a very toxic drug. Carboplatin and oxaliplatin, the second and third generations with lower toxicity, are used in cases where this drug, which has a potentially damaging potential to cause hearing loss in children, is considered to be too toxic in the patient to be used. Cisplatin is administered intravenously to the body due to its poor absorption from the gastrointestinal tract, thus increasing the utilization of the drug. Cisplatin can be used in combination with etoposide and bleomycin, and up to 99% improvement can be achieved with this combined treatment. Generally, 4 different vial forms of cisplatin, which are 10 mg, 25 mg, 50 mg, and 100 mg are used in the clinic. Two mechanisms of resistance of cisplatin, namely natural resistance and acquired resistance, have been found in the clinic. While natural resistance can develop without the drug being given to the body - that is, without exposure to the drug - acquired resistance occurs when exposed to the drug.
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, and numerous
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. One of the
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cisplatin
, which is a platinum complex.
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Cisplatin
is an antineoplastic agent
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in the
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treatment
of testicular, ovary, oral cavity, and pharynx, lung, cervical, lymph node, bone, skin, bladder, brain, and kidney cancers. The main mechanism of action of
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cisplatin
is inhibition of DNA replication and killing of
rapidly
proliferating carcinogenic cells. It does this by binding to the N-7 reagent center on purine residues, interfering with normal transcription and replication mechanisms, causing DNA damage and preventing cell division.
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to providing successful
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,
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cisplatin
is
also
a
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toxic
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drug
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Carboplatin
and
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oxaliplatin
, the second and third generations with lower toxicity, are
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used
in cases where this
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, which has a
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Cisplatin
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to the body due to its poor absorption from the gastrointestinal tract,
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etoposide
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bleomycin
, and up to 99% improvement can
be achieved
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, 4
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vial forms of
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cisplatin
, which are 10 mg, 25 mg, 50 mg, and 100 mg are
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used
in the clinic. Two mechanisms of
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resistance
of
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cisplatin
,
namely
natural
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resistance
and acquired
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resistance
, have
been found
in the clinic. While natural
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resistance
can develop without the
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given
to the body
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, without exposure to the
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acquired
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occurs when exposed to the
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IELTS essay Cancer treatment. Discuss it.

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  American English
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279 words
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