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Can you cook your favourite dish at home?

I like cooking; I have started cooking when I was a 12-Year-Old boy. I cooked a Pizza at the age of 13. I love cooking Iranian dishes, especially Qorme Sabzi. I have leant cooking from my mother. I am going to cook Pizza this week. My parents enjoying when I and my brother cooking it. It is necessary to cook when you leave alone. Also, women like men help them in cooking. Can you cook your favourite dish at home?
I like cooking; I have
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started
cooking when I was a 12-Year-
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Old
boy. I cooked a Pizza at the age of 13.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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love
cooking Iranian dishes,
especially
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Qorme
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Sabzi
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have
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leant
cooking from my mother.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am going to cook Pizza this week. My parents enjoying when I and my brother cooking it. It is necessary to cook when you
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leave
alone.
Also
, women like
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men
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help
them in cooking. Can you cook your
Possible spelling mistake. ‘favourite’ is British English.
favourite
dish at home?
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IELTS essay Can you cook your favourite dish at home?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
80 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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