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By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In some part of the world, Giving comittment to murders like death penalty for punishing is sometimes make some people guilty. that why many people believe that these become irrelevant and could be chance with is life in prison that is more rational punishment for killer. I completely agree, that prison more fair than death punishment. In order that people who kill the other with out purpose will get the same fair justice.

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 more rational punishment for killer. I completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
, that prison more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :equitable
fair
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In order that
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people
 who kill the other This word is usually written together. Did you mean “without”?without
with out
 purpose will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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fair
 justice. 