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Write about the following topic. Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? oYpK
Online shopping has become a popular preference among people in recent years. They find it convenient to buy groceries or book a ticket on the Internet. But some still prefer traditional brick-and-mortar. Buying commodities online has many advantages, one of them is its availability, people can shop on the internet at any time of the day and in the comfort of their homes, while is not possible for a retail store. The Lockdown proved this to be true, where people could easily shop online and get it delivered within a few days while the shops remained closed. Along with this many online sites offer discount coupons on regular shopping which entices the buyer. For instance, if you are planning to buy a book from a local book store you are unlikely to find a discount to reduce the price of the book, however, any online bookstore discounts. The shopper can compare items and choose the best one according to his preference. Despite this, online shopping might be considered risky by people that have an addiction to it. Besides, purchasing online is timing consuming because it requires at least four to fives days for the whole transaction to be completed. Several individuals incline to touch and inspect a product before buying it, which is not possible in online shopping. In conclusion, like many other things in life online shopping too has its pros and cons. I find shopping online to be an excellent way to shop for certain items. However, for other items, I would rather shop at a Local store. Also, there are times when just want to get out of the house and need to do some shopping. For these times, it is "Hi Ho It's Off to the Store I Go"
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in recent years. They find it convenient to
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groceries or
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a ticket on the Internet.
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still
prefer traditional brick-and-mortar.

Buying commodities
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has
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many
advantages, one of them is its availability,
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people
can
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shop
on the internet at any time of the day and in the comfort of their homes, while is not possible for a retail
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store
. The Lockdown proved this to be true, where
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people
could
easily
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shop
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online
and
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get
it delivered within a few days while the
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shops
remained closed. Along with this
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many
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online
sites offer discount coupons on regular
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shopping
which entices the buyer.
For instance
, if you are planning to
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buy
a
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from a local
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you are unlikely to find a discount to
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reduce
the price of the
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,
however
, any
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bookstore discounts. The shopper can compare items and choose the best one according to his preference.

Despite this,
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online
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might
be considered
risky by
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people
that have an addiction to it.
Besides
, purchasing
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online
is timing consuming
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because
it requires at least four to fives days for the whole transaction to
be completed
. Several individuals incline to touch and inspect a product
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before
buying it, which is not possible in
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shopping.

In conclusion
, like
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other things in life
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online
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too has its pros and cons. I find
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shopping
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to be an excellent way to
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shop
for certain items.
However
, for other items, I would
rather
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shop
at a Local
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.
Also
, there are times when
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just
want to
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out of the
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and need to do
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some
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. For these times, it is
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Hi Ho It's Off to the
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IELTS essay Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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