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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? jk58

Shopping online become necessary thing in 21st century. You can buy whatever you wish online. Situation gained momentum during COVID-19. From one side, everything can be delivered to the door, you save a lot of time and can study, spend time with family etc. From another side, people go out less and less and become more isolated by staying away from public places and loseing comunication. First of all, world moving and updating to current reality and businesses aren't unique - they're going to the network either. No matter how you react on it because these are current realities. Number of things you scare to buy because it might not fit for too many reasons such as: too big, too small, not the same as on picture etc but tecnologies updating and most of things become easier to choose. For example, before was unbelievable to choose a sunglasses. Even idea of buying a glasses online freak you out. Not anymore. I found a webpage which gives opportunity to try wear glasses by your webcam. Webcam trying on your face which glasses will fit to you. Innovations! Appropriately, there are negative effects too. Human being staying farther and farther away form other people. You can buy even food online. Reasons go somewhere are disappear. You can travel online by virtual reality. But behind it all are your empty soul without communication. For example, it's easier to press the button and end conversation instead of listening how your friend or boss critics you. There are no reasons by update yourself, work on yourself. You can always get around and avoid uncomfortable moments. In conclusion, I would like to say that online shopping and work is better than fisical but you have to know the measure no matter what you doing. Alsways remember that you are human and lives in society. You have feelings and you are alive. Go out and spend time with close people.

Shopping You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 become necessary thing in 21st century. You can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 whatever you wish You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
. Situation gained momentum during COVID-19. From one side, everything can be delivered
 to the door, you save This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 time and can study, spend time with family etc. From another side, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 go out less and less and become more isolated by staying away from public places and Possible spelling mistake found.losingLoyang
loseing
Possible spelling mistake found.communication
comunication
.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, world moving and updating to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 reality and businesses aren't unique Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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 they're going to the network either. No matter how you react on it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 these are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 realities. Number of things you scare to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it might not fit for too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 reasons such as: too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
, too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
, not the same as on picture etc This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
Possible spelling mistake found.technologies
tecnologies
 updating and After 'most of', you should use 'the' ("most of the things") or simply say "most things".most of the thingsmost things
most of things
 become easier to choose. For example
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 was unbelievable to choose Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a sunglass" or simply "sunglasses"?a sunglasssunglasses
a sunglasses
. Even This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 of buying a glasses You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 freak you out. Not anymore. I found a Possible spelling mistake found.web page
webpage
 which gives opportunity to try wear glasses by your webcam. Webcam trying on your face which glasses will fit to you. Innovations!

Appropriately
, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 effects too. Human being staying farther and farther away form other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. You can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 even food You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
. Reasons go somewhere are Consider using a past participle here: "disappeared".disappeared
disappear
. You can travel You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 by virtual reality. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 behind it all are your empty soul without communication. For example
, it's easier to press the button and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 conversation instead
 of listening how your friend or boss critics you. There are no reasons by update yourself, work on yourself. You can always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 around and avoid uncomfortable moments.

In conclusion
, I would like to say that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 shopping and work is better than Possible spelling mistake found.physicalfiscalfinical
fisical
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 know the measure no matter what Did you mean "you're doing", "you are doing", or "you were doing"?you're doingyou are doingyou were doing
you doing
. Possible spelling mistake found.AlwaysAl sways
Alsways
 remember that you are human and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 in society. You have feelings and you are alive. Go out and spend time with close This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. 