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I was planning to buy a house in Canada, but was thinking to hire a lawyer for assistance, as its very difficult to deal with the matters involving the transfer and payments of the land while some one is trying to buy the property being away in another country from the dealing parties. So the reasonable approach would be to find a proper law firm online and deal with their layers, but now the problem will be that how to find out wether the firm is authentic or not. To find out regarding the authenticity of the firm one must check with the bloggers and their comments about the firm to hire,
I was planning to
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buy
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house
in Canada,
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but
was thinking to hire a lawyer for assistance, as
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its
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very
difficult to deal with the matters involving the transfer and payments of the land while
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some one
is trying to
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buy
the property being away in another country from the dealing parties.
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So
the reasonable approach would be to find a proper law
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firm
online and deal with their layers,
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but
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now
the problem will be that how to find out
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wether
the
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firm
is authentic or not. To find out regarding the authenticity of the
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firm
one
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must
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check
with the bloggers and their comments about the
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firm
to hire,

IELTS essay buying a house in calgary

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
112 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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