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Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Countries, all around the world, are seeking ways to reduce their reliance on fossil fuels, and renewable energy is widely considered to be a pragmatic solution to this goal. However, design complexity and a high investment cost may act as limiting factors for substituting conventional fossil fuel-based energy with other alternatives in the energy portfolio. I completely agree that clean energy, such as wind and solar, will dominate the future energy mix to supply essential services in cities and their transportation infrastructures. Analyzing the ability of sustainable energy to both provide a safe, clean and reliable energy, and protect the environment will show this. .
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considered to be a pragmatic solution to this goal.
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with other alternatives in the
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portfolio. I completely
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that clean
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, such as wind and solar, will dominate the future
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mix to supply essential services in cities and their transportation infrastructures. Analyzing the ability of sustainable
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energy
to both provide a safe, clean and reliable
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, and protect the environment will
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IELTS essay Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. with this opinion?

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105 words
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