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Building of roads for cutting down of trees

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The construction of roads was the first step towards urbanisation, which led to utilisation of various natural resources including trees. The concept of construction of roads and subsequent cut down of trees is like that of a double edged sword. The merits that depict that construction of roads is important lies in the fact that roads are the sine qua non of a good economy, they play a major role in interconnecting major cities with each other or urban or suburban areas hence playing an important factor in trade, commerce and travel. Meanwhile roads also save lives, by offering a quick commute to hospitals. Overall roads help in providing smooth transport to various places via vehicles, had there been no roads all the vehicles that we own would have been useless. This doesn’t mean that the statement in motion could be justified, cutting down trees means cutting down air purifies. Trees take in carbon dioxide and give out oxygen, and since the latter is the gas we breathe in cutting down plants would mean that we are shutting our oxygen factories. The list does not end here, trees have roots which hold the soil together, and hence if they are cut soil erosion is inevitable. Apart from that trees are shelter to many animals, and that act of chopping up the trees would justify our greed for urbanisation. As previously stated the statement is debatable, roads have their importance and trees have their significance. In my opinion unnecessary cut down of trees for building roads where it not required should be discouraged and a re-forestation drive should be started where for every tree cut two trees should be planted. This would help us to cover the losses of environmental pollution and would help animals dwelling on trees to find their shelter.
The construction of
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roads
was the
first
step towards
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urbanisation
, which led to
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utilisation
of various natural resources including
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trees
. The concept of construction of
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roads
and subsequent
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cut
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down
of
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trees
is like that of a
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double edged
sword.

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The
merits that depict that construction of
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is
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important
lies in the fact that
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are the sine qua non of a
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good
economy, they play a major role in interconnecting major cities with each other or urban or suburban areas
hence
playing an
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important
factor in trade, commerce and travel.
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Meanwhile
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roads
also
save
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lives
, by offering a quick commute to hospitals.
Overall
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roads
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help
in providing smooth transport to various places via vehicles, had there been no
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all the vehicles that we
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own
would have been useless.

This doesn’t mean that the statement in motion could
be justified
, cutting
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down
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trees
means cutting
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down
air purifies.
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Trees
take in carbon dioxide and give out oxygen, and since the latter is the gas we breathe in cutting
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down
plants would mean that we are shutting our oxygen factories. The list does not
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end
here,
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trees
have roots which hold the soil together, and
hence
if they are
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cut
soil erosion is inevitable. Apart from that
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trees
are shelter to
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many
animals, and that act of chopping up the
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trees
would justify our greed for
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urbanisation
.

As previously stated the statement is debatable,
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roads
have their importance and
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trees
have their significance. In my opinion unnecessary
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cut
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down
of
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trees
for building
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roads
where it not required should
be discouraged
and a re-forestation drive should be
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started
where for every
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tree
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cut
two
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trees
should
be planted
. This would
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help
us to cover the losses of environmental pollution and would
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help
animals dwelling on
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trees
to find their shelter.
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IELTS essay Building of roads for cutting down of trees

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
301 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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