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Both article and the lecture about Totteya trees.

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Both article and the lecture about Totteya trees. Whileas the author explains three ways experts are considering to reduce the decline of the trees' numbers. The professor believes that non of these strategies could be satisfactory solution, and then, she cast doubt on each reason. To start with, the passage posts that the first option is to reestablish Torreya in the same location in which it thrived for thousands of years. On the contrary, the lecturer refuts this point by saying that it is unlikely to be successful. This tree is extemely effected by the weather, and the claimate over that place is highly afffected by global warming and have a lot of changes. The trees might not be able to servive on that. Secondly, the reading contends that moving the trees to other location far from Florida, by using a process knonw as assisted migration could be the other way to help the Torreya tree to return to an enviroment that is more suited to its survival. On the other hand, the professor challenges this point by mention the Black Luckes tree, in which the assisted migration used for it. The result was speed spread and threat the other tree servivial. Finally, the article aargues that the preserve Torreya in reaseach center could be the third option. Contrastly, the listening argues that this could produce trees which not divers and strong to beat the disease.
Both article and the lecture about
Totteya
trees
.
Whileas
the author
explains
three ways experts are considering to
reduce
the decline of the trees' numbers. The professor believes that non of these strategies could be satisfactory solution, and then, she cast doubt on each reason.

To
start
with, the passage posts that the
first
option is to reestablish
Torreya
in the same location in which it thrived for thousands of years.
On the contrary
, the lecturer
refuts
this point by saying that it is unlikely to be successful. This
tree
is
extemely
effected by the weather, and the
claimate
over that place is
highly
afffected
by global warming and have
a lot of
changes
. The
trees
might not be able to
servive
on that.

Secondly
, the reading contends that moving the
trees
to
other
location far from Florida, by using a process
knonw
as assisted migration could be the
other
way to
help
the
Torreya
tree
to return to an
enviroment
that is
more suited to its survival. On the
other
hand, the professor challenges this point by mention the Black
Luckes
tree
, in which the assisted migration
used
for it. The result
was speed
spread and threat the
other
tree
servivial
.

Finally
, the article
aargues
that the preserve
Torreya
in
reaseach
center could be the third option.
Contrastly
, the listening argues that this could produce
trees
which not divers and strong to beat the disease.
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IELTS essay Both article and the lecture about Totteya trees.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
236 words
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