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Life in many cities around the world is becoming so expensive that one day only rich people will be able to live there.

Life in many cities around the world is becoming so expensive that one day only rich people will be able to live there. RNrgp
The substantial influence of world is becoming so expensive has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent years. This is fearful situation. However, a productive suggestion can solve the situation to a large extent. the causes and the measure are discussed further. At the outset, there are numerous reasons why in many cities around the world is becoming so expensive. Firstly, in modern era population has been increase day to day as a result people have less space to live and if need more place to live they should pay more money. Secondly,
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and if need more place to
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they should pay more money.
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IELTS essay Life in many cities around the world is becoming so expensive that one day only rich people will be able to live there.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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