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Blue print renovation for accountancy's main office

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The two blue prints illustrate renovation that took place in A accountancy's main office. In general, some previously partitioned walls were brought down creating a well arranged, neat and specious seating area. Rooms were reduced to open space with no corridor. Prior to renovation, the office had nearly ten small rooms and corridor. Office electronics, equipments and desks were in different rooms. While after redesigning, the new office had three rooms less, with equipments at the center making it easily accessible to individual open office working area. In addition, the latest office had sofas introduced at the reception and common working area at the center were introduced, desks arranged for four working tops as well. Adjacent to reception, there is newly introduced storage room. Lunch, meeting and managers office rooms were least affected as they were previously. The size of the office remained the same but with additional seating space at tge reception and also open working area in the middle.

The two blue prints illustrate renovation that took place in A accountancy's main office.

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some
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 down creating a well arranged, neat and specious seating area. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
Rooms
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reduced
 to open space with no corridor.

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office
 had nearly
 ten This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
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rooms
 and corridor. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
Office
 electronics, equipments and desks were in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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rooms
. While after redesigning, the new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 had three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
 less, with equipments at the center making it easily
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office
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working
 area.

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office
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 tops as well
. Adjacent to reception, there is newly
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room
. Lunch, meeting and managers You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
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rooms
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affected
 as they were previously. The size of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
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