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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

It is believed that a higher salary is more important than job satisfaction. In any case, I do not agree with this idea at all. In my opinion, job satisfaction is more necessary. Firstly, I think it is useless to have a high salary where there is job satisfaction. At the same time, higher wages may be more substantial to many people, but it must be acknowledged that over time, they come to the conclusion that career pleasure is significant. It is also believed that if there is no job satisfaction, employees are generally unproductive. Basically, it is as if they are forced to work. And in fact, the productivity of a company or enterprise is quite low. This fact has been proven by many researchers. Recently, many companies prefer job amusement in the job process. Secondly, it is quite possible to get the highest profit and implement large-scale work processes when there is assignment comfort. Specifically, some people leave their jobs despite having a high earnings because they do not have job satisfaction. Certain groups of people pay special attention to job satisfaction. They place special emphasis on being a qualified professional in the direction of a career or any special, as well as operating productively in a performance environment. Of course, for a certain productivity, task enjoyment is the main nuance. Finally, I believe that job happiness is more important than a high pay because it attracts and motivates people.
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is believed
that a higher salary is more
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important
than
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job
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satisfaction
. In any case, I do not
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agree
with this
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idea
at all. In my opinion,
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job
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satisfaction
is more necessary.

Firstly
, I
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think
it is useless to have a high salary where there is
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job
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satisfaction
. At the same time, higher wages may be more substantial to
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many
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people
,
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but
it
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must
be acknowledged
that over time, they
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come
to the conclusion that career pleasure is significant. It is
also
believed that if there is no
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job
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satisfaction
, employees are
generally
unproductive.
Basically
, it is as if they
are forced
to work. And in fact, the productivity of a
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company
or enterprise is quite low. This fact has
been proven
by
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many
researchers. Recently,
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many
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companies
prefer
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job
amusement in the
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job
process.

Secondly
, it is quite possible to
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get
the highest profit and implement large-scale work processes when there is assignment comfort.
Specifically
,
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some
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people
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leave
their
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jobs
despite having a high
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earnings
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because
they do not have
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job
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satisfaction
. Certain groups of
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people
pay special attention to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
satisfaction
. They place special emphasis on being a qualified professional in the direction of a career or any special,
as well
as operating
productively
in a performance environment.
Of course
, for a certain productivity, task enjoyment is the main nuance.

Finally
, I believe that
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job
happiness is more
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important
than a high pay
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because
it attracts and motivates
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people
.
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IELTS essay Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Provide relevant examples if necessary.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
242 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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