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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction

Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction OV6m3

It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose a job with high wage, even if it doesn't appeal to you at all. I completely disagree with this idea and think that job satisfaction is much more crucial than salary. First of all I believe that job satisfaction gives people a sense of fullfilment that no money can guarantee. although someone is weaning a high salary but feels compromises with his conscience. this person won't enjoy his life. while pursuing one's interests may bring pleasure

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 argued that it is more advantageous to choose a job with high wage, even if it doesn't appeal to you at all. I completely disagree with this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
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 that job satisfaction is much more crucial than salary. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
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