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Adverts that have the potential to upset people have no place in a civilised society. Discuss.

Adverts that have the potential to upset people have no place in a civilised society. Discuss. ljXAW
In today’s world, advertisements are one of the major mediums of communication, which is seen everywhere around starting from newspaper to TV. Although some of them bring value to the nation, while some are deemed unnecessary and unrequired. In my opinion, there is a balanced weightage for both the viewpoints. This essay will decipher the points. Firstly, ads for cosmetic products, which is a created make-belief for common civilians, wherein those who have an unlighted shade of skin get carried away imagining that they can become fairer with the usage of these. It not only creates frustration, but also decrease our bank balance. For example, jokes related to these goods, are very common in cinema, which will consist of a person applying the cream to become fair, instead turn darker than how they previously were. On the other hand, some are intended and targeted at the general safety of the public but may visually seem very upsetting. Such commercials are conceived to be disturbing, with the intention for public to know the consequences and stop using such items or follow rules. To take an instance, prior to the beginning of a movie, there is an ad to publicize ‘Stop Smoking’, which shows the live images of cancers associated with it. At the same time, to create an awareness of safety, people show after effects of accidents as promotion, seemingly very improper, but with great messages. To conclude, paid announcements are very vital to provide information and guide us some health and safety rules, which can be followed by people who are serious, while those who are not, can expect consequences.
In
today
’s world, advertisements are one of the major mediums of communication, which is
seen
everywhere around starting from newspaper to TV. Although
some
of them bring value to the nation, while
some
are deemed
unnecessary and
unrequired
. In my opinion, there is a balanced weightage for both the viewpoints. This essay will decipher the points.

Firstly
, ads for cosmetic products, which is a created
make
-belief for common civilians, wherein those who have an unlighted shade of skin
get
carried away imagining that they can become fairer with the usage of these. It not
only
creates frustration,
but
also
decrease our bank balance.
For example
, jokes related to these
goods
, are
very
common in cinema, which will consist of a person applying the cream to become
fair
,
instead
turn darker than how they previously were.

On the other hand
,
some
are intended
and targeted at the general safety of the public
but
may
visually
seem
very
upsetting. Such commercials
are conceived
to be disturbing, with the intention for public to know the consequences and
stop
using such items or follow
rules
. To take an instance, prior to the beginning of a movie, there is an ad to publicize ‘
Stop
Smoking’, which
shows
the
live
images of cancers associated with it. At the same time, to create an awareness of safety,
people
show
after effects of accidents as promotion,
seemingly
very
improper,
but
with great messages.

To conclude
, paid announcements are
very
vital to provide information and guide us
some
health and safety
rules
, which can
be followed
by
people
who are serious, while those who are not, can
expect
consequences.
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IELTS essay Adverts that have the potential to upset people have no place in a civilised society. Discuss.

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270 words
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