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Big salary is much more important than jab satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree.

Big salary is much more important than jab satisfaction. POOX
In recent decades, salary and job satisfaction is becoming controversial issue among public across the globe as everyone on the earth wants to live luxurious life and also they wants to fulfil their needs while job satisfaction will leads to productivity of work and maintain a healthy lifestyle. In this essay, I will discuss my viewpoints along with my opinion in upcoming paragraphs. To embark on, everyone know that money is a root cause of all evil.
In recent decades, salary and job satisfaction is becoming controversial issue among public across the globe as everyone on the earth wants to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
luxurious life and
also
they
The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "want"
wants
to fulfil their needs while job satisfaction will leads to productivity of work and maintain a healthy lifestyle. In this essay, I will discuss my viewpoints along with my opinion in upcoming paragraphs.

To embark on, everyone
The pronoun 'everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "knows", "knew".
know
that money is a root cause of all evil.

IELTS essay Big salary is much more important than jab satisfaction.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
77 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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