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Overall, we can undoubtedly see that milk was following the downwards trend while Pepsi was following the rising trend which touched the peak and overlapped in between 1995 and 2000. Looking into the details, there was a marginal increment in the expenditure of Pepsi between 1990 and 2005, which had risen from 26 million liters to 30 million liters whereas, we can see an astronomic drop in the consumption of milk from 1990 to 2000, which dropped from almost 36 million to 26 million and overlapped in the middle of 1995 and 2000. After that, there was a rapid climb in the utilization of Pepsi from 30 million liters in 2005 to 38 million in 2010 but milk remained almost constant until 2010.
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that milk was following the downwards trend while Pepsi was following the rising trend which touched the peak and overlapped in between 1995 and 2000.

Looking into the
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, there was a marginal increment in the expenditure of Pepsi between 1990 and 2005, which had risen from 26
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liters to 30
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liters whereas, we can
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see
an astronomic drop in the consumption of milk from 1990 to 2000, which dropped from almost 36
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to 26
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million
and overlapped in the middle of 1995 and 2000. After that, there was a rapid climb in the utilization of Pepsi from 30
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million
liters in 2005 to 38
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in 2010
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milk remained almost constant until 2010.
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IELTS essay beverage consumption in canada

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
123 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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