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beverage consumption in canada

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Overall, we can undoubtedly see that milk was following the downwards trend while Pepsi was following the rising trend which touched the peak and overlapped in between 1995 and 2000. Looking into the details, there was a marginal increment in the expenditure of Pepsi between 1990 and 2005, which had risen from 26 million liters to 30 million liters whereas, we can see an astronomic drop in the consumption of milk from 1990 to 2000, which dropped from almost 36 million to 26 million and overlapped in the middle of 1995 and 2000. After that, there was a rapid climb in the utilization of Pepsi from 30 million liters in 2005 to 38 million in 2010 but milk remained almost constant until 2010.

Overall
, we can undoubtedly
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see
 that milk was following the downwards trend while Pepsi was following the rising trend which touched the peak and overlapped in between 1995 and 2000.

Looking into the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, there was a marginal increment in the expenditure of Pepsi between 1990 and 2005, which had risen from 26 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 liters to 30 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 liters whereas, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 an astronomic drop in the consumption of milk from 1990 to 2000, which dropped from almost 36 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 to 26 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 and overlapped in the middle of 1995 and 2000. After that, there was a rapid climb in the utilization of Pepsi from 30 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 liters in 2005 to 38 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 in 2010 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 milk remained almost constant until 2010. 