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Our environment will be seriously deteriorated if there is no exist of forest.

Our environment will be seriously deteriorated if there is no exist of forest. bb6bP
Apart from that, the irresponsible industry dumping waste into the lakes and rivers has caused water pollution. They pour hazardous pollutants into the streams just to reduce the cost of disposing of the waste. This action has destroyed marine habitat and threaten the lives of aquatic organisms. Moreover, deforestation is also the significant human being that damage the environment. Humans clearing the forest for agriculture use like planting palm oil trees. Forest offer watershed protection, prevent soil erosion and mitigate climate change. Our environment will be seriously deteriorated if there is no exist of forest.
Apart from that, the irresponsible industry dumping waste into the lakes and rivers has caused water pollution. They pour hazardous pollutants into the streams
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the cost of disposing of the waste. This action has
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marine habitat and threaten the
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of aquatic organisms.
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, deforestation is
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the significant human being that damage the environment. Humans clearing the forest for agriculture
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like planting palm oil trees. Forest offer watershed protection,
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soil erosion and mitigate climate
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. Our environment will be
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IELTS essay Our environment will be seriously deteriorated if there is no exist of forest.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
95 words
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