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Our environment will be seriously deteriorated if there is no exist of forest.

Our environment will be seriously deteriorated if there is no exist of forest. bb6bP

Apart from that, the irresponsible industry dumping waste into the lakes and rivers has caused water pollution. They pour hazardous pollutants into the streams just to reduce the cost of disposing of the waste. This action has destroyed marine habitat and threaten the lives of aquatic organisms. Moreover, deforestation is also the significant human being that damage the environment. Humans clearing the forest for agriculture use like planting palm oil trees. Forest offer watershed protection, prevent soil erosion and mitigate climate change. Our environment will be seriously deteriorated if there is no exist of forest.

Apart from that, the irresponsible industry dumping waste into the lakes and rivers has caused water pollution. They pour hazardous pollutants into the streams This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the cost of disposing of the waste. This action has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
 marine habitat and threaten the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 of aquatic organisms. Moreover
, deforestation is also
 the significant human being that damage the environment. Humans clearing the forest for agriculture This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 like planting palm oil trees. Forest offer watershed protection, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 soil erosion and mitigate climate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
. Our environment will be seriously
 deteriorated if there is no exist of forest. 