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Imagine you are Taylor Jones, Inspector, Ministry of forestry and animal reservation.. You were involved in the rescue of the black rhino. Now write a report to your senior officer, Bob Smith, Head of the Department, Ministry of forestry and animal reservation, about how the rescue was done

Imagine you are Taylor Jones, Inspector, Ministry of forestry and animal reservation. . You were involved in the rescue of the black rhino. Now write a report to your senior officer, Bob Smith, Head of the Department, Ministry of forestry and animal reservation, about how the rescue was done bb6D3

To: Bob Smith, Head of the Department, Ministry of forestry From: Taylor Jones, Inspector, Ministry of forestry and animal reservation Subject: Rescuing the black rhinoceros. Date: 03rd May 1961 Salvaging the Black Rhino When the embankment was constructed in the late 1950s, thousands of animals were marooned on islands. Applications were made and funds were raised to buy vessels and tools for saving these animals and take them to a shelter. This mission came to be recognized as Operation Noah. As a consequence of this situation, a black rhino was deserted on a small isle. The animal was pursued for numerous periods until eventually it was driven past a gunman with a bow loaded with a muscle-soothing arrow. The rhino was shot by the sharpshooter and tranquilized. It was then tumbled onto a sleigh, drawn to the coast, and was loaded onto a boat kept buoyant by eighteen petrol drums. Lifeboat, rhino, and everyone was then hauled to the shore some twelve miles away to safety.

To: Bob Smith, Head of the Department, Ministry of forestry

From: Taylor Jones, Inspector, Ministry of forestry and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnaturalbodily
animal
 reservation

Subject: Rescuing the black rhinoceros.

Date: 03rd May 1961

Salvaging the Black Rhino

When the embankment was constructed
 in the late 1950s, thousands of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
were marooned
 on islands. Applications were made
 and funds were raised
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 vessels and tools for saving these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
 and take them to a shelter. This mission came to be recognized
 as Operation Noah.

As a consequence of this situation, a black rhino was deserted
 on a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 isle. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnaturalbodily
animal
was pursued
 for numerous periods until eventually
 it was driven
 past a gunman with a bow loaded with a muscle-soothing arrow.

The rhino was shot
 by the sharpshooter and tranquilized. It was then tumbled onto a sleigh, drawn to the coast, and was loaded
 onto a boat This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 buoyant by eighteen petrol drums. Lifeboat, rhino, and everyone was then hauled to the shore This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 twelve miles away to safety. 