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Beside a lot of advantage, some people believe that the internet create many problems. To what extent you agree or disagree.

There are many benefits of the internet. However, some people assume that lots of trouble has been arising due to the internet. This essay disagrees with the statement that the internet is a bane as it assists an individual not only to communicate with their loved ones but also helps in providing educational sources for students at their fingertips. The Internet plays an important role in everyone’s life. It provides means to communicate with our family members or colleagues within a fraction of seconds. For example, as per the research conducted by the Telecommunication Department of India, the number of internet protocol addresses has increased by 32 percent in a decade. In addition, it keeps on rising at a pace of 5 percent per year. The Internet provides endless knowledge to students and people of all age groups. It is an instant and reliable source to get the desired information without any delay irrespective of time, place, or distance. In addition, students can learn while enjoying the whole process with the help of animations, and skits. It is a boom for those who live in a remote area and can’t complete their education due to the distance. In a survey conducted by the Ministry of Education, 30 percent of students were able to complete their education via online courses in the last 5 years. In conclusion, the Internet is an important part of our lives. It makes people closer when physical proximity is not possible. It imparts a valuable and reliable source of education to our future generation and diminishes the barrier of distance between the students and their learning.
There are
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many
benefits of the internet.
However
,
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some
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people
assume that lots of trouble has been arising due to the internet. This essay disagrees with the statement that the internet is a bane as it assists an individual not
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only
to communicate with their
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loved
ones
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but
also
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helps
in providing educational sources for
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students
at their fingertips.

The Internet plays an
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important
role in everyone’s life. It provides means to communicate with our family members or colleagues within a fraction of seconds.
For example
, as per the research conducted by the Telecommunication Department of India, the number of internet protocol addresses has increased by 32 percent in a decade.
In addition
, it
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keeps
on rising at a pace of 5 percent per year.

The Internet provides endless knowledge to
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students
and
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people
of all age groups. It is an instant and reliable source to
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get
the desired information without any delay irrespective of time, place, or distance.
In addition
,
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students
can learn while enjoying the whole process with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of animations, and skits. It is a boom for those who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in a remote area and can’t complete their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
due to the distance. In a survey conducted by the Ministry of
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Education
, 30 percent of
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students
were able to complete their
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education
via online courses in the last 5 years.

In conclusion
, the Internet is an
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important
part of our
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lives
. It
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makes
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people
closer when physical proximity is not possible. It imparts a valuable and reliable source of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
to our future generation and diminishes the barrier of distance between the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
and their learning.
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IELTS essay Beside a lot of advantage, some people believe that the internet create many problems.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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