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Believing yourself is powerful

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Start believing in what you want. If you want to live a normal and successful life, you need to believe that you have succeeded! If you want to be happier, you need to believe that you are happy. What you believe determines who you become. If you believe you can do it, you can. All of that is natural, it will also take effort and only when you truly believe that you are capable of doing something, you will feel a tremendous amount of motivation and strength to make it happen
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a normal and successful life, you need to
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that you have succeeded! If you want to be happier, you need to
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that you are happy.

What you
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determines who you become. If you
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you can do it, you can. All of
that is
natural, it will
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take effort and
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that you are capable of doing something, you will feel a tremendous amount of motivation and strength to
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IELTS essay Believing yourself is powerful

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
90 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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