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believed that in future the science, will be progressed more than today. Consequently, transportation system will be changed and all the vehicles will be driveless. Furthermore all passengers will be moved by vehicles , which don't have any drivers.

believed that in future the science, will be progressed more than today. Consequently, transportation system will be changed and all the vehicles will be driveless. Furthermore all passengers will be moved by vehicles, which don't have any drivers. w7jLr
We have some duties based on job description. It is commonly believed that in future the science, will be progressed more than today. Consequently, transportation system will be changed and all the vehicles will be driveless. Furthermore all passengers will be moved by vehicles, which don't have any drivers. In my opinion, it would be positive change and in this essay, my view and the rational reasons will be discussed. Transportation Systems plays a crucial role in communities and desirable transportation brings better life. Nowadays, individuals are not enthusiastic about driving. Although drivers can obtain acceptable salary, People prefer to be doctor or engineer. For example, in England the number of truck's drivers have been decreased noticeably and transportation system have been damaged. As a result, driverless trucks and buses are desirable choice for solving this problem. In addition, a number of accidents are acquired, because of unacceptable actions of drivers. Researchers claimed that tiredness and drivers' fault, are the main factors in the road disasters. Not only some drivers have been died, but also passengers are affected irreparable because of faults. Around two years ago, an enormous tragedy happened, which a bus fell down in the valley, and all the young students passed away. In my opinion, accidents will be disappeared by electronic driverless cars, trucks and buses. To sum up, in my point of view, driverless cars, buses and trucks will have positive effects in traveling. Not only the lack of drivers will be solved, but also a number of life will be saved by decreasing accidents rates.
We have
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some
duties based on job description.

It is
commonly
believed that in future the science, will
be progressed
more than
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today
.
Consequently
, transportation system will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
and all the vehicles will be
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driveless
.
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Furthermore
all passengers will be
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moved
by vehicles, which don't have any
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drivers
. In my opinion, it would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
and in this essay, my view and the rational reasons will
be discussed
.

Transportation Systems plays a crucial role in communities and desirable transportation brings better life. Nowadays, individuals are not enthusiastic about driving. Although
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drivers
can obtain acceptable salary,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
People
prefer to be doctor or engineer.
For example
, in England the number of truck's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drivers
have
been decreased
noticeably
and transportation system have
been damaged
.
As a result
, driverless trucks and buses are desirable choice for solving this problem.

In addition
, a number of accidents
are acquired
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of unacceptable actions of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drivers
. Researchers claimed that tiredness and drivers' fault, are the main factors in the road disasters. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drivers
have been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
died
,
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but
also
passengers are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
irreparable
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of faults. Around two years ago, an enormous tragedy happened, which a bus fell down in the valley, and all the young students passed away. In my opinion, accidents will
be disappeared
by electronic driverless cars, trucks and buses.

To sum up, in my point of view, driverless cars, buses and trucks will have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
effects in traveling. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
the lack of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drivers
will
be solved
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
a number of life will
be saved
by decreasing accidents rates.

IELTS essay believed that in future the science, will be progressed more than today. Consequently, transportation system will be changed and all the vehicles will be driveless. Furthermore all passengers will be moved by vehicles, which don't have any drivers.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
260 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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