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Being able to speak foreign language is an advantage these days. Some people think that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school, while others think children should begin in secondary school.

Being able to speak foreign language is an advantage these days. Some people think that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school, while others think children should begin in secondary school. KEL0
Nowadays, exploring foreign languages are getting more and more common day by day. Tourism is developing and major people travel some countries, however they suffer to talk with inhabitants of those countries because of language problems. It is obvious that english and russian languages are global to whole the world. In every country almost all people's second language is English or Russian. People should learn foreign language at young age. For instance primary school the reason is that people's brain is full of energy and ready to learn foreign languages at youth. Being skillful at speaking foreign language is absolutely advantage side for people. If people begin learning another language in secondary school, they cannot focus on it. Because from secondary school teachers are altered and also subjects are a lot comparatively primary school. That's why it is the best way of exploring foreign language to start it from primary school. To sum up, people should never stop learning, because foreign languages unite us. That's is to say people can understand each other to whole the world. Moreover it is beneficial to improve relationship with other countries.
Nowadays, exploring
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foreign
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languages
are getting more and more common day by day. Tourism is developing and major
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people
travel
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some
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countries
,
however
they suffer to talk with inhabitants of those
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countries
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because
of
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language
problems.

It is obvious that
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english
and
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russian
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languages
are global to whole the world. In every
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country
almost all
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people
's second
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language
is English or Russian.
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should learn
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foreign
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language
at young age.
For instance
primary
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school
the reason is that
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people
's brain is full of energy and ready to learn
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foreign
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languages
at youth. Being skillful at speaking
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foreign
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language
is
absolutely
advantage side for
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people
.

If
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people
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begin
learning another
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language
in secondary
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school
, they cannot focus on it.
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from secondary
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school
teachers
are altered
and
also
subjects are a lot
comparatively
primary
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school
. That's why it is the best way of exploring
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foreign
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language
to
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start
it from primary school.

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people
should never
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stop
learning,
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because
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foreign
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languages
unite us.
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That's is
to say
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people
can understand each other to whole the world.
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Moreover
it is beneficial to
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improve
relationship with other
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countries
.

IELTS essay Being able to speak foreign language is an advantage these days. Some people think that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school, while others think children should begin in secondary school.

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4 paragraphs
187 words
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