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Being a friend with same opinions or with whom who disagrees

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Most of the time opinions are based on factual information, perception, and the way of imagination towards something. These perceptions or opinions might be the key aspect to become a friend with someone. In our daily lives as well, we discuss many events within our friend circles. Sometimes we reach an agreement or sometimes the opinion might lead to the starting point of an argument. Hence, it becomes a critical expectation when we choose friends. Every second person around us has the same thought process where he tries to be a friend with the person who has the same way of thinking as himself. Various beliefs are contributing and proved to be the basis of choosing a friend. The one side of those people suggests we should always be choosing the one, who has the same way of processing thoughts as ours. These people will always give us the strength and confidence of being right. Also, they allow us to share everything calmly because we know that our friend will surely understand the situation and will eventually provide a similar opinion. When our friend also possesses an identical opinion then this gives us an act of additional courage to fight, survive and win in every situation. However, having the same opinion arises another problem, where we might not be able to understand the fact of being incorrect or we would never discuss the negative outcomes of any problems. Having friends who are agreeing on everything is bliss but in the long run, it may harm us unintentionally. Another belief where people think our friends should be showing their agreement on everything. Instead of this they at should discuss, show disagreement, and show us a mirror. These type of friendships seems bitter but in the future, it will always help us to go with the right instead of considering ourselves as right. If friends show disagreement on some point then it will start another brainstorming and allowing us to think more, grow more. This disagreement will help us to reach to better destination and teaches us to respect other people's worth as well. In my opinion, I believe to be a friend with the person who has a mixture of these specific characteristics. A friend should be the one who supports us when it is much required i. e. agreeing with what we are desiring. On the contrary, he should be able to contradict us to reach to better conclusion of any matter.
Most of the time
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opinions
are based
on factual information, perception, and the way of imagination towards something. These perceptions or
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opinions
might be the key aspect to become a
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friend
with someone. In our daily
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lives
as well
, we discuss
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many
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events
within our
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friend
circles.
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Sometimes
we reach an agreement or
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sometimes
the
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opinion
might lead to the starting point of an argument.
Hence
, it becomes a critical expectation when we choose
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friends
. Every second person around us has the same
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thought
process where he tries to be a
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friend
with the person
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who
has the same way of thinking as himself.

Various beliefs are contributing and proved to be the basis of choosing a
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friend
. The one side of those
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people
suggests we should always be choosing the one,
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who
has the same way of processing thoughts as ours. These
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people
will always give us the strength and confidence of being right.
Also
, they
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allow
us to share everything
calmly
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because
we know that our
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friend
will
surely
understand the situation and will
eventually
provide a similar
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opinion
. When our
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friend
also
possesses an identical
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opinion
then this gives us an act of additional courage to fight, survive and win in every situation.

However
, having the same
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opinion
arises another problem, where we might not be able to understand the fact of being
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incorrect or
we would never discuss the
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negative
outcomes of any problems. Having
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friends
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who
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are agreeing
on everything is bliss
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but
in the long run, it may harm us
unintentionally
.

Another belief where
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people
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think
our
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friends
should be showing their agreement on everything.
Instead
of this they at should discuss,
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show
disagreement, and
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show
us a mirror. These type of friendships seems bitter
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but
in the future, it will always
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help
us to
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go with
the right
instead
of considering ourselves as right. If
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friends
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show
disagreement on
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some
point then it will
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start
another brainstorming and allowing us to
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think
more, grow more. This disagreement will
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help
us to reach to better destination and teaches us to respect other
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people
's worth
as well
.

In my
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opinion
, I believe to be a
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friend
with the person
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who
has a mixture of these specific characteristics. A
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friend
should be the one
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who
supports us when it is much required
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i. e.
agreeing with what we are desiring.
On the contrary
, he should be able to contradict us to reach to better conclusion of any matter.
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IELTS essay Being a friend with same opinions or with whom who disagrees

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
412 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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