Doubtlessly, celebrities such as an eminent movie star or a well-known athlete has some difficulties besides the advantages of reputation in society that if they cannot control condition, it will be altered to crucial problems in their lives.
Fundamentally, each man would like to be a celebrity for its benefits instance well-paid of their jobs, familiar all around their country or even in the world, having the respect of people specially their fans, achieving to prosperity and receiving trophy would be pleasant for each person. Also, they usually are on a trip and their life would not be boring. But these are just surface sight of their life glanced by us during they would be on our vision.
Whereas, being a famous individual can be followed by many difficulties for example: consider hate of rivals proponents from a sport personality or when an actor would be in centre of criticisms which are sever situations. On the other hand, they are under supervision of reporters and individuals so they can not have own calm lifestyle. They have to work hard to be on their high quality in their competitions which they will not fall down. As they are as the kids' pattern so they should pay attention to their altitudes because their tiny mistake will be converted to a huge bad manner by the press exaggerating story. Could you accept to be far from your family for a couple of months or even years? Yes, national team member who are in preparing the camp for contests must be far from their family for a period of time that is very intolerable.
In sum, despite of some profits of being a popular guy, its disadvantages would be as well as advantages so it seems better to consider all aspects of this type of life.
Doubtlessly
, celebrities such as an eminent movie star or a well-known athlete has
some
difficulties
besides
the advantages of reputation in society that if they cannot control condition, it will
be altered
to crucial problems in their
lives
.
Fundamentally
, each
man
would like to be a celebrity for its benefits instance well-paid of their jobs, familiar all around their country or even in the world, having the respect of
people
specially
their fans, achieving to prosperity and receiving trophy would be pleasant for each person.
Also
, they
usually are
on a trip and their life would not be boring.
But
these are
just
surface sight of their life glanced by us during they would be on our vision.
Whereas, being a
famous
individual can
be followed
by
many
difficulties
for example
: consider hate of rivals proponents from a sport personality or when an actor would be in
centre
of criticisms which are sever situations.
On the other hand
, they are under supervision of reporters and individuals
so
they can not have
own
calm lifestyle. They
have to
work
hard
to be on their high quality in their competitions which they will not fall down. As they are as the kids' pattern
so
they should pay attention to their altitudes
because
their tiny mistake will
be converted
to a huge
bad
manner by the press exaggerating story. Could you accept to be far from your family for a couple of months or even years? Yes, national team member who are in preparing the camp for contests
must
be far from their family for a period of time
that is
very
intolerable.
In sum,
despite of
some
profits of being a popular guy, its disadvantages would be
as well
as advantages
so
it seems better to consider all aspects of this type of life.
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