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Being a celebrity bring benifit or doubt

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In this contemporary era every one becomes a celebrity or well know sports person because this status gives you respect in the society. in my point of view being a well known person has own benefit and doubt. This will present certain facts and example to support my view point before coming to the actual conclusion. Firstly, being a well known person he or she polite in their nature. Specially with the fans because of the fans they are celebrity. for instance, if someone came closer to them for photo or autograph, celebrity should talk with them in a manner. Stop behaving the rude way with them. Secondaly

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 my point of view being a well known person has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
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 instance, if someone came closer to them for photo or autograph, celebrity should talk with them in a manner. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
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