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become inspired by history

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Those historical stories can also serve to inspire individuals to greatness. History remembers brilliant people and their heroic acts that have changed the shape of nations. You get a huge amount of motivation from learning about the inspirational events that make up where we are today. It only takes one great story from the pages of history to light up children’s imagination and spur them on to do great things.

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IELTS essay become inspired by history

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American English

2 paragraphs

70 words

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