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Become Inspired by eating food

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Those historical stories can also serve to inspire individuals to greatness. History remembers brilliant people and their heroic acts that have changed the shape of nations. You get a huge amount of motivation from learning about the inspirational events that make up where we are today. It only takes one great story from the pages of history to light up children’s imagination and spur them on to do great things.
Those historical stories can
also
serve to inspire individuals to greatness. History remembers brilliant
people
and their heroic acts that have
changed
the shape of nations. You
get
a huge amount of motivation from learning about the inspirational
events
that
make
up where we are
today
.

It
only
takes one great story from the pages of history to light up children’s imagination and spur them on to do great things.
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IELTS essay Become Inspired by eating food

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
70 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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