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Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basic produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance.

Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basic produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. BJM3a
Globalisation has revolutionized award world in many aspects now, we don't belong to big planet earth. We belong to small Global Village everything is available everywhere. There are many advantage and disadvantage of transporting goods over a long distance in my opinion was outweigh the cons. on the positive side transporting good overall long distance givers as a lot of choice. We can taste the variety of fruit and vegetable from all parts of the world, for example about 10 years ago. We hardly so Kiwi fruit which is from New Zealand but now it has a place on every Frost and earlier. We had a very few show brands like Bata and Corona but now the market is flooded with three box Nike Adidas and other foreign brands secondly, many people get employment in this field. small business Have a chance to expand globally and it increase the overall economy of the country. Finally, it help in developing good relation between countries, which help in international cooperation and peace. if countries are dependent upon the one on the other economic success than armed conflict would be less likely. on the downside important goods can have a negative effect on a local culture this can be seen in countries such as Japan where imported food has become more popular than traditional local produce eroding people's understanding of their own food tradition or second major disadvantage is police 1 rain boots are transported thousands of Miles by road sea, and air it increase pollution from exhaust fumes to conclude imported goods has both merits and demerits, but the pros outweigh the bu
Globalisation
has revolutionized award world in
many
aspects
now
, we don't belong to
big
planet earth. We belong to
small
Global Village everything is available everywhere. There are
many advantage
and disadvantage of transporting
goods
over a long distance in my opinion was
outweigh
the cons.

on
the
positive
side transporting
good
overall
long distance givers as
a lot of
choice. We can taste the variety of fruit and vegetable from all parts of the world,
for example
about 10 years ago. We hardly
so
Kiwi fruit which is from New Zealand
but
now
it has a place on every Frost and earlier.
We
had a
very
few
show
brands like
Bata
and Corona
but
now
the market
is flooded
with three box Nike Adidas and other foreign
brands


secondly
,
many
people
get
employment in this field.
small
business Have a chance to expand globally and it
increase
the
overall
economy of the
country
.
Finally
, it
help
in developing
good
relation between
countries
, which
help
in international cooperation and peace.
if
countries
are dependent upon the one on the other economic success than armed conflict would be less likely.

on
the downside
important
goods
can have a
negative
effect on a local culture this can be
seen
in
countries
such as Japan where imported food has become more popular than traditional local produce eroding
people
's understanding of their
own
food tradition or second major disadvantage is
police
1 rain boots
are transported
thousands of Miles by road sea, and air it increase pollution from exhaust fumes

to conclude
imported
goods
has both merits and demerits,
but
the pros outweigh the
bu
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IELTS essay Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basic produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
270 words
6.0
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